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TM- Womb of Prostitution by ~Tyshea:iconTyshea:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


   Glaring lights-----

            Piercing
                       Stabbing
                   my eyes

--Against the Dark Indigo Dyed--

            No stars…
      Barely a Moon
                             Ghostly face…

-----Of Avarice and Lechery

        My Chastity…
                   Not even from the beginning

               Forever Denied

Jeweled hands grasping---

       Tearing away
   Adolescence

           Denied

    --(Denied, Denied)--

This Neverland of Maturity

     Ripping
          Losing

      Sanity


      …
        ..
          .


   ---Where is my Never…



             …Never Land?
©2009 ~Tyshea
:icontyshea:

Author's Comments

The past for Tyberius d'Amato, my Mafia character.

doesn't make a lot of sense since it's a little narrative, stream-of-consciousness, but I like it |D;;

Totally inspired by :iconcasual-redemption: and his two pieces, [link] [link]

I must be asking for a death wish, submitting five things >U>;;;
I have more to come too, blargh orz


Thank you for any and all faves/comments/watches! xD

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~Bakuriel Jun 26, 2009, 3:03:30 PM
More writing works from Tyshea. ^^ I'm gonna start a petition to get you to do this sorta stuff more often eventually, I hope you realize.

--
Your wings are folded from exhaustion, and faded from too much time in the light. Fly from this place young angel, these burdens are mine alone.

Time = Money; Money = Power; Power = Energy; Energy = Matter. No wonder my wallet is a black hole...
:iconarghsdemeter:
*arghsdemeter Jun 26, 2009, 3:08:17 PM
oooooh i love it how its like
i cant really make sense of it (sorry im slower than other people)
the words like make a really abstract picture
its really cool!
:iconsilentsketcher:
~silentsketcher Jun 26, 2009, 3:09:32 PM
I liked the "jeweled hands" bit. :nod:

--
"Didn't we have some fun though? Remember when the platform was sliding into the fire pit and I was like 'Goodbye', and you were like 'NOOO WAAAY', and I was all 'We pretended we were going to murder you'. That was great..." -GLaDOS
:iconryuu1818:
~ryuu1818 Jun 26, 2009, 3:15:57 PM
ooh! rolls around on floor 'till dead

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Meega.
:icondoridachi:
*Doridachi Jun 26, 2009, 3:29:45 PM
INTENSE NARRATIVE IS INTENSE. Lmao, seriously though. This is amazing. The format of your writing is always unique and easy flowing. Your choice of words is good, and you can always tell there's a deeper meaning than the already present emotion and story. Ahaha, who knew the cookie stealing Tyberius had such an insane past? xD Good job, good job!

--
I can't ride a bike. I know. Seriously.
Commision me anyway: DO IT.
:iconnoviceartist487:
~NoviceArtist487 Jun 26, 2009, 3:36:28 PM
I like how you use the format of the poem to create the illusion of falling into the abyss of the persona's mind. It is a poem full of symbolism and imagery.
Truly, I am amazed and awed.

--
"'Tis a poor shepherd who blames his flock for his own failures."
:iconcrucifer:
~Crucifer Jun 26, 2009, 3:54:43 PM
I agree. We need MOAR!!!

--
With age comes experience. With experience comes wisdom. With wisdom comes the ability to sound intelligent.
:iconautumnreprise:
~AutumnReprise Jun 26, 2009, 4:09:58 PM
Nice! x) I like your pieces. O:

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I'm a retard and I spout nonsense! 8D
:iconxena111returns:
*xena111returns Jun 26, 2009, 4:27:55 PM
LOVE the style. Lots of feeling in the poem.

--
"I'm a kitten away from going up a level!" :eager:
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